Ahh! I've finally found you! I'm not too good at elaborating comments, but I've enjoyed both Ten Steps and Reach Out so so much at the kink meme~
I really like how you fit in all the missing pieces, with Teddie staying at Kanji's and working as a mascot for the shopping district, and how you weaved in some of the social link events :D Yousuke's characterization was spot on and I'm not surprised that if he wasn't so hung up over Saki's death, that his second biggest concern would be Junes. (Seriously, with the way he keeps asking you to help out and how he's familiar with the store, you'd think he was the manager, not his dad)
I am so stalking this comm now. Great name too XDD I love it when Yousuke says that hehe
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Date: 2009-06-05 10:52 am (UTC)I'm not too good at elaborating comments, but I've enjoyed both Ten Steps and Reach Out so so much at the kink meme~
I really like how you fit in all the missing pieces, with Teddie staying at Kanji's and working as a mascot for the shopping district, and how you weaved in some of the social link events :D Yousuke's characterization was spot on and I'm not surprised that if he wasn't so hung up over Saki's death, that his second biggest concern would be Junes. (Seriously, with the way he keeps asking you to help out and how he's familiar with the store, you'd think he was the manager, not his dad)
I am so stalking this comm now. Great name too XDD I love it when Yousuke says that hehe