That's a really, really cool prompt, and you made it SO PLAUSIBLE. Such a sucker punch. Guh. And so well-written. The ending line was PERFECT, even though a part of me wants to read the battle and aftermath.
I don't even really know what to say other than that it's AMAZING. I take my hat off to you for writing this.
![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
no subject
Date: 2009-03-12 10:51 am (UTC)That's a really, really cool prompt, and you made it SO PLAUSIBLE. Such a sucker punch. Guh. And so well-written. The ending line was PERFECT, even though a part of me wants to read the battle and aftermath.
I don't even really know what to say other than that it's AMAZING. I take my hat off to you for writing this.
aslkfjslakfjslakjf